Let me give you a Melvin

In contrast to the gluttonous goats from the last post, Melvin Goaté is a connoisseurial consumer. Rhymth! Melodies! Harmonies! MUSIC! That's what Melvin devours, and he wants nothing more than to create music himself. Major redesign from the previous incarnation of Mel, but I think this guy's a bit more compelling (though, maybe that's due to his wardrobe being conspicuously similar to my own). Thinking of doing the whole book in this style: muted watercolors with colored pencil on smooth(ish) paper.

Any thoughts?